标题 In addition, the drawing can be easily/readily entitled as…

二、原因分析（表达任选其一）

It is this apparent transcendence of the illustration that unfolds a significant connotation that we should take initiative to

render help to people in need without hesitation.

or: Obviously, the picture

conveysa far-reaching concern in order to remind us of stopping putting a giant target sign on the back of environment.

or: There seems a deeper notion behind this picture: we should stop putting a giant target sign on the back of environment.

列举原因：

1 列举2-3点：“正正反”or“正反”

正：有sth，带来的好处 first and foremost

反：无sth，导致的坏处 furthermore

2 适当举例子

Here is an illustration of the power of sth.

For instance, /for example /a case in point is that

A persuasive array of examples is available in our daily life.

Relevant examples abound in our life, and one is that…

3 研究表明

an emerging body of research shows that

a recent survey conducted by China Daily illustrates that a considerable majority of citizens deem XX as a source of many positive phenomena.

三、措施解决

1 再次总结

重要性 To sum up, there is no gainsaying that maintaining ecological balance

must be placed in the to-do list immediately.

2 提出号召。如果字数不够，提两点（政府和个人）；字数足够，多提政府so the department concerned/authority/parents should take relative initiative to respond forcefully.

3 唱高调。Only by doing this can we shape our collective future together.

It’s XX that can help us build a harmonious society./pave a new road for individuals’ fulfillment.

基本的框架就是以上三步走，组成三段式

，这是任何地方都能找到的主体框架，半小时就可以搞定！

那么，真正使你的作文出彩、得分、超越其他人的部分在哪里？——表达！！！

以2000年考研真题一为例，我之前写过，你可以看看！！！

自己写完作文，需要修改的也可以私信我看看