??与往常用语比较，商务英语(www.mison.cn)特别是商务写作的表达要更为正式。那么怎么批改用词，使得表达更为正式呢？下面沪江英语教研教师给咱们说明3个小主张，期望可以协助咱们前进商务写作的才干。

首要，商务词汇一般选用词义比照单一的词来替代词义相对活络的词。

看下面两个语句：
Please correct your copy of the contract accordingly.
Please amend your copy of the contract accordingly.

correct和amend都有标明“批改”的意思，可是在商务英语中，咱们运用amend就显得比照稳重，而correct是一个白话常用词汇，咱们一般就不会运用，类似这样的词汇还有

tell → inform；buy → purchase；start → commence等等。

其次，商务词汇一般选用单个动词替代相同意义的动词词组，显得愈加正式。比方下面的语句：

They managed to set up the brand loyalty of their consumers.
They managed to establish the brand loyalty of their consumers.

set up和establish都标明“树立”，假定在白话中，这两种表达都可以，语法也都契合规则，可是在商务书面语中倾向于用单个动词，更为稳重。还比方keep / go on → continue； add to → supplement等等。

再者，商务词汇一般会运用凌乱的介词短语来替代简略的介词和连词，然后体现商务书面语的正式性。

比方：
We can grant you

a 5% discount if your order in no less than 1000 dozen.
We can grant you a 5% discount provided that your order in no less than 1000 dozen.

if和provided that 都标明“假定”，可是在商务书面语中倾向于运用凌乱的provided that来体现其稳重性与正式性。类似的替换还有for → for the purpose of；because of → by virtue of；about → with reference to / with regard to等等。

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