??高考英语作文能加分的好句子（6）

老师叮咛：一堂好课，不但应该是地狱到天堂的桥梁，更应该是灵魂觉醒的媒介；一堂好课要让学生不但有收获感，还要有得救感，不但有得救感，还要有神圣感。

下面的几篇题型都是历年高考真题中最常见的、最值得同学们学习的题型！经过了全网首席英语名师李辉老师团队高度认真的整理校对，无错、可信！可供全国各省高中生打印、学习、背诵！

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一、8个技巧介绍

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★第一招：审题细心。

审题好比驾驶员打方向，方向对了，哪怕开得慢点，也会顺利到目的地。如果审题不清，书面表达的成绩不知道会有多惨。学生真正开始写作前，必须花相当一部分时间做写前阅读、思考等准备。包含以下四方面：1)审体裁。根据情景提示首先要弄清写何种体裁文章。2)审结构。明确开始部分、正文部分和结尾部分，定好段落。3)审格式。如日记、便条、书信、通知的格式等。4)审内容。弄清什么必需写，哪些略写，尤其是图画式书面表达，要学会连贯性，读懂图的意思。5)审人称和时态。弄清书面表达要求用何种人称，根据材料确定短文的基本时态。

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★第二招：衔接流畅。

恰当使用逻辑词语，使各要点间连贯，行文通顺。比如表并列或递进：

and, both… and, neither…nor,?not only…but also; 表转折或让步：but, although, though, however, even though, in spite of,?on the?contrariety

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★第三招：短语地道。

如果能多用短语，则可回避书面表达中的中式英语，同时也能减少错误几率。尤其在考试时，如果使用短语，会使文章增加亮点。

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★第四招：句式丰富。

一篇可读性强的文章，通常能较好体现学生对英语语言结构、词块、句式的使用。所以各类句式的多元表现往往能够提升书面表达的成绩。初中阶段英语写作常用的句式如下：

there be…; the more…the more…等。尤其是复合句的适恰使用对提升文章的层次很有协助。对绝大部分同学来说，仿写很重要，在教材和很多的阅读书籍中都蕴含着丰富的好词佳句。

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★第五招：情感真实。

同样的话题，有些文章没什么情感，冷冰冰；有些文章很有温度，有真情实感。情感真实主要可通过如下方法实现：1)内容的表现。比如：2020年的中考英语书面表达my dream，绝大部分的作文都还是停留在表面上。i want to be a good father because my daddy was always so busy when i was a little boy. he has no time with me and my mother. 虽然文章的文采并不是很好，但很有真情实感，令读者有心动的感觉，也是好文章。2)副词的使用。在句子的某些位置，添加副词，能够使句子和文段更有人性味，更有情感性。如：i really enjoy the beauty of?the sea in the?sun. 加了一个really，就有味道了。?

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二、2个作文加分句型

英语写作中，同一个意思的表达可以使用不同的句型，我们在写不同的作文时可以变换使用这些句型，以免造成自己和老师的视觉疲劳，而且可以丰富我们的语言储备，使我们在进行英语写作时能够游刃有余。

1.表示原因

1) there are?three reasons for this.

2) the reasons for this are as follows.

3) the reason for this is so?obvious.

4) the reason for this is not far to seek.

5) the reason for this is that…

6) we have good reason to believe that…

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there are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life. firstly, people’s living standard has been greatly improved. secondly, most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like. last but not least, more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.

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注：如果写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。如：great changes have taken place in our life.?there are three reasons for this. 这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。

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2.表示好处

1) it has the following advantages.

2) it does us a lot of good.

3) it benefits quite a lot.

books are like friends.?they and they can open our minds and written your horizon. therefore,?reading extensively is of great benefit to us.

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三、英语作文怎么提高分

近几年来全国英语高考试卷中的写作题大多为记叙文、议论文和应用文。在写作时，考生应注意以下几点。

写记叙文时要有时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果6要素，写作的时候要明白清楚地写出来。写人物时，要注意介绍人物的身世、经历和事迹等。叙事时要描写事情发生的经过与发展的结果，写清楚事情发生的前因后果等。

写议论文时要求考生就某一方面的问题通过摆事实、讲道理的方式来阐述自己的看法。且议论文应由论点、论据、论证3部分构成。

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四、典型例题

例1：

假设你正在参加全省中学生演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻开孩子的日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。内容包括：

1.?认为同学们不必为此烦恼。

2.?希望能够体谅父母的苦衷。

3.?建议与父母进行交流沟通。

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范文：

good morning, ladies and gentlemen：

some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. i fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad.?our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we are not getting into any trouble.?they have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same.?or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong. my suggestion is: tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them. if?you do not think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around?they are bound to read it.

thank you.

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例2：

假定你是李华，在一位名叫 tigermom 的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。请你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。

i’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old. i have a rule for my daughter: be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another. so he has been doing very well in school, but some of my friends keep telling me that i put too much pressure on her. am i wrong.

写作要点:

1.?表明自己的看法。

2.?陈述自己的理由。

3.?提出至少2条建议。

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范文：

hi, tigermom:

what puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in china. my idea is that it is quite right for you to do so.

although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for?their future university admission, development in wisdom emotion, health and life attitude should never be ignored. there are many examples around us. some all a students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. the reason is once that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.

further more, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up me and physically. so i suggest that you take your friends’?advice. more importantly let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teen angers once do.

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五、能加分的好句子

1. mrs.brown is an australian woman teacher with fair hair and blue eyes, who has been to many places of china.

布朗女士是一个澳大利亚的老师，她有一头金黄色的头发和一双蓝色的眼睛，她去过中国的各个地方。

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2.?on sunday, may 18, we will visit beijing, which has a history of 400 years.

5月8日，星期天，我们将会参观拥有400多年悠长历史的北京。

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3.?i think students should balance well between work and study.

我认为学生应该平衡好工作和学习两方面。

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4.?friendship is one of the most precious emotions in our life.

在我们的生命中，友谊其中的一种非常珍贵的感情。

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5.?it goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. （适用于自

编名言）

不言而喻，青春一去不复返。

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6.?last but not least, it will definitely benefit the citizens.

最后而又很重要的一点，它必定给市民带来福利。

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7.?with the increasingly rapid economic growth, more problems are brought to our attention.

随着日益迅速的经济发展，更多的问题受到我们的关注。

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8.?the preservation of forests has aroused people’s wide concern.

保护森林引发人们的广泛关注。

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9.?as far as i’m concerned, i am in favor of the opinion that…

就我而言，我赞同…的观点。

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10.?both governments and ordinary citizens should join hands to make this world a better place to live in, not only for ourselves, but also for future generations.

不仅仅是为了我们，更是为了我们的后代，政府和普通市民应该联合起来，使这个世界变成更美好的家园。

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六、高级句型

1. as far as i am concerned, i agree with the latter opinion to some extent.?

就我而言，在某种程度上我同意后者的观点。

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2.?as far as i am concerned, i am really/?completely in favor of the test/?policy.

就我而言，我真的完全支持这场测试这个政策。

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3. in conclusion/?a word, i believe that… 总之，我相信…

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4.?there is some truth in both arguments, but i think the disadvantages of…?outweigh its advantages.

这两种观点都有一定的道理，但我认为…的缺点超过了它的优点。

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5. in my opinion/?view, we should… 在我看来，我们应该…

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6.?as for me, i… 至于我，我…

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7. as i see it,… 正如我看到的，…

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8. from my point of view, 在我看来，

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9. personally, i think… 我个人认为…

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10. my view is that… 我的观点是…

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11. i think/?consider… 我认为/考虑…

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12. i take/?hold a negative/?positive view of… 我对…采取/保持消极的/积极的看

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13.?there are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones…

有一些原因，但总的来说，归结为三大原因。

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14.?there are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.

有很多因素可以解释…，但以下是最典型的因素。

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15.?many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.

许多方法可以有助于解决这个问题，但以下的可能是最有效的。

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16. generally, the advantages can be listed as follows. 一般而言，优势可以列举如下。

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17. the reasons are as follows. 其原因如下。

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18. because/?since we read the book, we have learned a lot. 因为我们读了这本书，我们学到了很多。

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19. if we read the book, we will learn a lot. 如果我们读这本书，我们就会学到很多。

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20. we read the book; as a result/ therefore/ thus/ hence/ consequently/ for this reason/ because of this, we’ve learned a lot. 我们读了这本书，因为这个原因，因为这，我们学到了很多。

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