(1) If you find that writing is hard is because it is hard. One of thehardest things that people do.

If you find that writing is hard is because it is hard—one of the hardestthings that people do.

(2) Stereotypes are a kind of gossip about the world. A gossip that makesus prejudge people before we ever lay eyes on them.

Stereotypes are a kind of gossip about the world, a gossip that makes usprejudge people before we ever lay eyes on them.

Stereotypes are a kind of goss

ip about the world that makes us prejudgepeople before we ever lay eyes on them.

2. 分词短语作状语的差错

Holding her in his arms, the moon hid behind the cloud.

As soon as the moon hid behind the cloud, he held her in his arms.

3. 润饰词错位

(1) Romeo received word that Juliet was dead from another messenger.

Romeo received word from another messenger that Juliet was dead.

(2) After leaving the stage, the audience’s applause called the musiciansback for an encore.

After the musicians left the stage, the audience’s applause called themback for an encore.

(3) Disruptive in the classroom, a teacher may become exasperated withhyperactive children.

Disruptive in the classroom, hyperactive children may exasperate ateacher.

4. 串句

Unproductive or uncooperative workers can seriously harm an organization,for this reason, employers need to have accurate information about employeeperformance, but when employees have full access to their own personnel files,co-workers and even supervisors will often find it difficult to give frankcriticism of underachievers or to report troublemakers.

Unproductive or uncooperative workers can seriously harm an organization;for this reason, employers need to have accurate information about employeeperformance. But when employees have full access to their own personnel files,co-workers and even supervisors will often find it difficult to give frankcriticism of underachievers or to report troublemakers.

5. 时态差错

The researchers admitted that they falsified crucial data in the study.

The researchers admitted that they had falsified crucial data in thestudy.

6. 代词差错

(1) Too often people either keep their feelings to themselves or take itour on others.

Too often people either keep their feelings to themselves or take them ouron others.

(2) Each girl and boy must do their part to keep the home firesburning.

Each girl and boy must do her or his part to keep the home firesburning.

(3) This college has their own entrance requirements.

This college has its own entrance requirements.

(4) If one wishes to participate in the political process, you can begin byvoting regularly.

If one wishes to participate in the political process, one can begin byvoting regularly.

(5) The fire in the library was finally put out. For a while, they thoughtan unhappy employee might have started it.

The fire in the library was finally put out. For a while, the library staffthought an unhappy employee might have started it.

7. 规划紊乱

Because Hemingway’s style is simple makes his writing accessible to allreaders.

Because Hemingway’s style is simple, his writing is accessible to allreaders.

Hemingway’s simple style makes his writing accessible to all readers.

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